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Oooh Amanda I love this! I want to know more…. It’s so evocative.

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Thanks Anna. Sorry there is no more!

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🤣🤣🤣

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What an amazing story, it was totally compelling. I like the prompt idea too and it's one that brings so many choices of objects.

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Thanks Angela. Really glad you enjoyed it. Let me know if you create anything from the prompt.

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So strange, I liked it and I did not. Better said, I liked a lot some bits and others I felt were out of place. But! There is a big But, it is not the story, it is me and the way my mind filters the story through my personal rules and regulations. I did give it my attention till the end though and that is the best compliment anyone can ever pay us. 💐

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Thanks for reading, Alina!

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How many words was this story? I thought Flash Fiction was limited to about 50 or 100 words. I thought this story was a lot longer.

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Hi Rose, thanks for reading my story. It’s about 950 words. Flash is typically anything up to around 1000 words, or even 1500. If you read the ones published by The New Yorker many of them are even longer than that.

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