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Wonderful story! I think it's excellent how the thoughts alternate every minute while waiting for Uber and get shorter and shorter. Is it a kind of countdown or even a cooldown?

Thank you for a beautiful read!

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Yes a bit of both. And a comedown! Thanks so much for your lovely comments.

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I very personal and interesting. Thanks for sharing and I hope you never got any foot infections if that was a regular habit. ... nudge wink. !!

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Ha ha don’t worry I made that bit up. I always kept my shoes on! 😂

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What a fantastic story! I love how the narrative shortened with the time. I'm very inspired by your writing!

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Thank you so much for such a lovely comment, Victoria! You made my morning much brighter 🙏💙

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