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I believe our bodies do their best to alert us but sometimes the brain won’t listen. I love this Amanda and the prompt to write something in the same vein. Oh see what happened there - a body part got a mention!

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Thanks Angela. Ha - you now have to write a scene or story with veins in it!

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Oh the challenge is on…

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I really liked this story, Amanda. Thanks for sharing! ❤️

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Thanks Don! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it 😊💙

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Love the story and the prompt. And this line:

“The clench in her stomach, which she had stopped noticing it had been there so long, slowly unfurled.” 🥲

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Thanks Stephanie. Glad you enjoyed my story and hope the prompt brings you something great for your writing!

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Excellent! Love this, Amanda. I enjoyed your author’s note as well.

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Thanks Kathy 😊

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